どうかな？ How about this?

６月６日にテメキュラで日本の文化を紹介する子供祭りがある。そこで友達数人と一緒にお店を出して、手作りのものを売る事にした。あと１ヶ月でどれくらいの作品が出来るかな？現在一生懸命試行錯誤しながら商品を製作中。今週はこの着物のデザインのカードを４０枚ほど作りました。どうかな？皆好きかな？
There will be a children's Matsuri (Japanese cultural event) in Temecula on June 6th. Friends and I decided to set up a booth to sell the things we make. I am not sure how many things I can make in less than a month. I am now working hard trying to make different things. I finished about 40 greeting cards with Origami Kimono this week. What do you think? Hope people would like this design.